Here's what I'm thinking: I want to improve the horrendous garbage fire that was that Flame Dragon Knight erotica hiding in a "novel" skin!
For one thing, I wanted to start with the villain.
In the novel he was a murderer rapist man who also happened to be a politician who "disliked the old ways" of his country, supposedly.
In my version...let's make him more friendly.
Maybe when after Grunbeld encounters BenedictArnold they hear something in the bushes and it turns out to be the nobleman...or something.
He wants to recruit Grunbeld into his army because of how well known his fighting ability is in his home town?
I dunno, as you can tell I'm fuzzy on the details at the moment...
For one thing, I wanted to start with the villain.
In the novel he was a murderer rapist man who also happened to be a politician who "disliked the old ways" of his country, supposedly.
In my version...let's make him more friendly.
Maybe when after Grunbeld encounters Benedict
He wants to recruit Grunbeld into his army because of how well known his fighting ability is in his home town?
I dunno, as you can tell I'm fuzzy on the details at the moment...